assalamualaikum,today we have learn about how to make introduction of essay exactly. before this I never know about this and I just write about what I know. Introduction must have 3 criteria to make our essay interesting and make people want to read it. There must have the hooks,transition and thesis statement. Miss Zue ask us to form into a group and we have to create the introduction based on the hooks that was given to us. Actually, many of us can't get and can't understands what we are going to do. So many misunderstanding happen, when the presentation day came out many of us scolded by Miss Zue because our presentation doesn't have any connection at all with assignment that she has ask us to do. That is 1st time Miss Zue act like that, and we are so afraid. Then Miss Zue give us a chance and ask us to do it again.
After we fix it all the mistakes,we do it the presentation again. Alhamdulillah its not bad but its not good really. Miss Zue can accepted and she give us an advice and ask us to make a correction. All students were so happy. From this we know how to make an introduction exactly, introduction were important because from introduction, we can attract people to read our essay.
link: http://fclass.vaniercollege.qc.ca/~kingsmip/tolkien/fotr_intro.htm
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